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Revan Starlighter
07-27-2005, 12:39 AM
Name - Revan Starlighter
Age - 74
Homeworld - Dellalt
Rank - Jedi Master
Weight - six foot
Height - 165

Datafile - Revan Starlighter was born on Dellalt. A world in the far stretches of the Outer Rim. His father was a repairman and ran the local repair and detail shop for speeders, star fighters and frieghtors through his home. The chances of him being discovered as a Force user on his homeworld were indeed slim at best. However by chance, or as Revan would tell, a Jedi Knight was guided to his homeworld by the Force. He immeadiatly felt the presence of the newborn and that night spoke with the boy's parents of it.

Revan's father Darren wasn't willing to let his son go. But his mother whom along with her family and now with her husband had scraped by meager wages and just enough to survive on their poor, barely industrializing world. After some convincing on her part; Revan was taken to Coruscant. There he was placed in Jedi training as a young toddler.

The years past and Revan found himself honourbly in Yoda's prestigous Bear Clan. A group of the stronger padawans placed together to learn under the Order's wisest and oldest member. Revan was over-zealous to say the least. But his unconcentrated and flagrant emotion slowly became his control under the great Master.

After his short time in the Bear Clan (7 years), Revan was up for padawanship. As most were, Revan was picked quickly and began his formal training. Retaining much knowledge from his tutalege under Yoda, he was an excellent student. His Master: Coleman Trebor was a well known and widely reknown Jedi Master, whom himself had learned under Yoda in a previous generation of the Bear Clan. It only made sense that the two worked in near perfect unison.

On possibly his most important mission, Revan journeyed with his Master to Bogden during the investigation of the Bando Gora gang lead by a rogue Jedi Knight. Following the trail of a bounty hunter they discovered her dead body when they arrived, as well as the bodies of many gang members and bounty hunters. It seemed some contest had been waged between the two. The two Jedi were unsure what to make of it. Years later Coleman would finally learn and it would cost him his life.

Coleman was a neogotiator and in turn Revan became one. They settled many disputes in their day as master and apprentice, but it finally came time for Revan to be knighted. Just before the break out of the Clone Wars, Revan was knighted by the Jedi Council. In the Room of Ascensions on Coruscant just after his Master became one of the Council, Revan recieved his knighthood and joined the ranks of the Jedi.

Revan and his Master held a strong bond even afterwards and just before the Battle of Geonosis, they two volunteered together. Coleman knew their would be no chance of negotiations with the Separatists at this point, but Revan was optimistic. When they arrived, the optimism was broken by the reality of the situation. Revan was one of the few to survive. His Master during a brave chance reached Dooku's seats, but was surprised to see the face of Jango Fett. Offguard by the revelation he was shot several times and fell to his death in the arena. Revan was devastated. But he gracefully let his Master go and was witness to his funeral pyre.

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The clone wars were taxing the Order like none could forsee. Revan himself was shipped all over the galaxy, and in the constant turmoil Revan was successful in most of his campaigns. But, one would catch him entirely by surprise.

During his final campaign and as he would come to learn all over the galaxy, his clone commander turned on him. On Cato Nemodia, he felt Master Plo Koon become one with the Force just as blaster fire came raining at him, not from the enemy, but from his own troops. Caught by surrpise he was hit twice and thrown down a hillside into a pile of mud, blood, and bodies. He crawled underneath them to avoid detection and for five days lay lifeless underneath it.

But he felt it, a burning feeling in his heart and shift in the Force. When it was safe he crawled out from the pile and made his way to help. After a few days at a medical center he went on the run.

His first home was Mrlsst. On the academic world he hid as a archivist at the Mrlsst Archive Center. He enjoyed his time there and read often, learning much wonderous information. But Imperial stretches reached the world and in fear he fled, but in doing so made himself a known Jedi. He was a wanted man, a wanted man with a hefty price.

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In his exile on Nar Kreeta, he was foolishly made as a Jedi when he helped two civilians escape a drunken Hunter's wrath. That night his small outlandish hut was attacked by three bounty hunters under a Hutt crimelords employ. He was afraid to flee the Hutt sector and so he made his way to nearby Nal Hutta. There once more by the same crimelord, Revan was caught. The aging Jedi Knight was forced to break free of the Hutt's compound, using his lightsaber.

It attracted to much unwanted attention.

He fled once more with an Imperial detachment on his tale. He fled to Nar Shaddaa to lose the Imperials in a crowd. He stayed there for quiet a few months before feeling safe enough to leave. He did so and went to far off Mygeeto in his newly aquired ETA-2 starfighter. One of his only possesions in his lifetime, Revan took good care of it and spent the rest of his hiding on Mygeeto.

There he meditated and listened to the force, spent his days reading and brushing up on history. Although his meager lightsaber skills never improved he practiced them nonetheless. He lived and spoke often with the people and befriended a young twi'lek repairmen named Anoon Bolanda.

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Well I got it done fairly quickly I'm happy to report. :)

Anways note I made him Master to account for his age, and I will be sure to meet my requirements in Into the Past.

Samantha Koortyn
07-27-2005, 08:31 AM
This looks good to me. :]

Corran Antilles
07-27-2005, 12:32 PM
Looks fine to me too.