Asking for some help

[Dac Starborn]

Well, I've been doing my required posts in the Past section (somewhat infrequently, I'm often distracted from writing very long posts like that)... And as I look at any forum revolving around writing as a way to get better as a writer, I was wondering if there was anything people thought could be improved. More details? Make it more snappy?

Would welcome any critiques here. Thank you, and I hope to hear from you (whoever you may be).

[Samantha Koortyn]

Your story is one of the best I've seen, anywhere (including published works).I would tell you that no more is necessary; you've proven you can write the character more than well enough.

But I want to see how it ends. :]

[Han Antilles]

I have to agree with Sam on that. It is very good writing. :)

[Corran Antilles]

I like it too.

[Wen_Mernde]

I agree with Sam. Your stories are very good. I'd like to see how the story ends as well.

[Dac Starborn]

Heheh, alright. Thanks everyone. My ego thoroughly stroked, I've been working on the last bit of it.

Unfortunately, I think it's going to be rather long (unless I edit it down a bit). And whenever I see something long that I feel I have to do, I invariably drag my heels over it (example, I was looking for an excuse to have a third shower today, staring in the stall instead of heading back to the terminal and the story I had to write).

So, it will be up. Just... not tomorrow, maybe not the next day either. Thank you for your support, and I hope I can live up to that praise.

[Samantha Koortyn]

We can wait, don't worry. :]

[Dac Starborn]

Wow. That was 1) Way too long 2) Trying to be too dramatic 3) Probably filled with formatting/factual mistakes and 4) Cheesy. Oh well. At least post 5 is finally up.

Cheers.

[Samantha Koortyn]

I loved it.

[Corran Antilles]

You intimidate me with your post length.

[Han Antilles]

Good read. :)

[Dac Starborn]

I didn't really intend for it to be that long. The idea seemed fairly simple to me on the surface.

A simple idea that just happened to stretch into seventeen and a half pages. *shudders* I will not be doing that for my usual, I assure you. Now, I guess, it's time to find something to jump into...

Thanks everyone.

[Wen_Mernde]

Twas a good read.